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The Day the
Earth Stood Still II
Revised Treatment
by
Ray Bradbury
11 September 1981
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treatment for a film written by Ray Bradbury in September,1981. This draft, although
commisioned by the studio, was never filmed. The treatment is 64 pages in length. This first appeared on Dreamerwww.com. The site is currently down. When that site comes back up, I will redirect this back to the site that did all the work. |
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| "The Day the Earth Stood Still II"
Revised
Treatment
by
RAY BRADBURY
11
September 1981 |
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"The Day the Earth Stood Still II"
Revised Treatment by Ray Bradbury
11 September 1981
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Stars and our World in
Space.
Down out of the stars
comes a burning object, not quite clear as yet.
It races across the
world, even as the shadow of night moves across the earth's surface.
Below, in various
cities of the world, we see that it is Christmas.
The children of Japan
look up as: The bright star moves over in the twilight.
CUT TO:
India. The children of
India stare up as: The burning object flies above.
CUT TO:
Moscow. Where children
and their parents, coming from church, look up, startled.
CUT TO:
Jerusalem, where Jew,
Christian, and Moslem children run out, point up, watch as: The meteor-like fire runs
across the stars.
In Paris, the same
story, as sunset arrives, bringing the star. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
2. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The children of Paris,
The children, suddenly, of London, look up. The star burns away across the Atlantic,
following the sun, keeping up with the rim of night, as Christmas Eve shadows across the
seas and lands:
CUT TO:
Cape Canaveral! Twilight
here, also. The Star has not as yet arrived.
Far off we can hear carols being sung...Christmas lights at a distance, faint laughter.
The CAMERA prowls over the landscape. We see the largest building in the world,
silhouetted against the setting sun... the Vehicle Assembly Building where the Apollo
rockets were fitted together and sent out to the launch-pads to go to the Moon.
The CAMERA peers briefly into the cathedral interior of the VAB where, perhaps, in a far
alcove we see that someone has set up a small Christmas tree, lit. Somewhere a radio is
playing, a mere whisper of some carol or other. The giant hangar is empty. It is obvious
that almost everyone has gone home early for the holiday.
The CAMERA prowls inside for a moment, and we may well see, standing tall, in the shadows,
the titanic ghost shapes of Apollo rockets, motionless and waiting. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
3. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The CAMERA moves out into sunset dune territory, scans
the various gantries which are deserted. The wind blows dust over the lone machineries.
The CAMERA finds and reads, quickly, a sign which says: ABANDON IN PLACE, No
Further Activity Authorized. Perhaps we can hear an echo of the old sounds,
voices counting down, the merest murmur of machineries, radios, computers.
THE VOICES
Oxygen check.....hydrogen
check.....ten minutes to launch.....etc., etc.....
The sounds rise and fall
in the sound of surf from the nearby sea. The CAMERA moves up, up, up along an Apollo
gantry.
A VOICE
...seven...six...five...four...
three...two...one...we have ignition!
There might be a mighty
blast, but instead an explosion of -- wings'
Birds fly up from the
dunes in a great bang of flying!
Click, click, click,
click, a MAN with a camera rises up to photograph this ascension.
The birds wheel and fly off.
The MAN continues to photograph them in the sunset light. Then he stops, checks his
camera, looks around, moves off. The CAMERA follows him along the dunes, past the
abandoned gantry where only the wind sounds now. He blinks up at the vast metal
machineries as he passes, his face full of remembrance. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
4. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 A car goes along the road a hundred yards off, a
Christmas tree tied to its top. Voices sing, raggedly: "Me wish you a Merry
Christmas, we wish you a Merry Christmas...."
The MAN snaps a picture
of the sign: ABANDON IN PLACE. He reads the sign, quietly, shakes his head. Surf pounds
the shore!
He backs into view, near
a road, closer to the Vehicle Assembly Building, snapping his camera, when:
Whoom! a car almost gets
him.
The car stops. A MAN
calls to him.
THE MAN
Hey, Atkins, what you
tryin'
to do, get killed for Christmas?
ATKINS peers in, shakes
hands. The MAN has a car full of laughing singing kids.
ATKINS
Carl! Hey--great!
THE MAN
I thought you were with
NASA in Washington?
ATKINS
(nods)
They sent me down to
photograph:
Christmas at Canaveral!
THE MAN
What Canaveral? Where?
(snorts, laughs
Ah, well -- there's plenty
of
Christmas! Right, kids!?
Make it Merry!
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
5. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The car drives off, the children laughing, singing.
Leaving ATKINS to murmur to himself, waving at them:
ATKINS
Merry....
Then, something jerks his
gaze. He glances at the sky. A star is there, very bright, on the horizon.
ATKINS
Venus? No. Wrong place -- it ---
The star moves. It rushes
down, becomes a saucer shape.
And as ATKINS watches:
The saucer hurtles toward
the Vehicle Assembly Building.
ATKINS gasps, because:
The VAB doors are
thundering wide, as if signaled to receive this visitor!
The craft flies down! And
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Flies right through the
vast gates of the Vehicle Assembly Building to vanish inside!!!
Stunned, ATKINS watches
as:
In the cathedral
interior, the spacecraft hovers, sinks, sets down.
Even as the great gates
thunder to shut in the craft!
ATKINS leaps through as:
the gates slam.
The craft glows in the
dark.
ATKINS circles, staring
at it. He whispers to himself:
ATKINS
Wait! I know this! |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
6. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He moves around the vast craft, memory shadowing his
face.
ATKINS
Thirty years ago. Yes!
A sound startles him. A
nearby elevator hums and drifts up in the strutworks, a shadow inside it.
He runs, stops, stares
up: as the elevator slides into the shadowly heights.
ATKINS stares from the
elevator to the spacecraft, then jumps, runs, punches a second elevator button. The second
elevator slams its door wide, he leaps in, goes up.
On the way into the dark
mountainslopes of machinery, he stares up at -- That other elevator, carrying its alien
cargo up and on up into yet darker cathedral heights.
It reaches the top of the
Vehicle Assembly Building a good ten seconds ahead of him. Distantly, we see and hear its
door clang wide, and a shadow move.
Reaching the top, ATKINS
runs by the other elevator, checking it. He glances up and around at further staircases.
He emerges on the roof of
the VAB as the last light of day fades.
He looks around at
emptiness. The wind mourns up here, as lonely as the wind out in the dunes among the
abandoned rocket pads.
A sound jerks him about.
It is the other elevator
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
7. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 400 feet below. Both elevators, in fact! He has been
tricked. Obviously, someone has pushed the button on the second one and leaped out to let
it go down by itself. Cursing, ATKINS races to a third bank of elevators, and has to wait,
while, far below, the other two elevators reach their destination.
Sliding down out of the
darkness, he emerges and looks around at silence and shadows. Whoever led him up to trap
him on the roof, was gaining time. They have had a full minute or more to vanish. They are
indeed gone.
A VOICE
Hey!
A building ATTENDANT
stares down from a catwalk above. The spacecraft glows and hums, with the small Christmas
tree nearby.
The ATTENDANT, stunned,
says:
THE
ATTENDANT
Who put that gift under my tree?
CUT TO
DARKNESS.
A slam of brakes. A car
arrives outside.
ATKINS is waiting for
this arrival outside in the blowing night.
The arrival is the VAB
DIRECTOR, who glares at ATKINS.
DIRECTOR
You've been drinking, of course?! |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
8. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks into ATKINS' face, sniffs, shakes his head.
DIRECTOR
No. Damn. Now, who shut
those doors?
He is glaring at the vast
doors now.
ATKINS
I wish I knew.
The DIRECTOR.opens the
small door in the great gate, steps through. And stops, shocked as:
We see what he sees: the
spacecraft, a light unto itself, filling the great church-like interior.
DIRECTOR
(to ATKINS)
You just got your job back.
ATKINS
I didn't know I was fired.
More officials arrive to
confer. For now, only a few people know of the alien spaceship's landing...ATKINS, plus
the ATTENDANT, plus the handful of Canaveral people gathered here.
The question is asked:
why did the craft land here, this place, at this hour?
CHRIS ATKINS almost
responds. A shadow crosses his face. He has half-remembered something about the visiting
ship. But he remains silent.
The great VAB doors are
locked, the various officials warned. For now, no one beyond the Base must know of this
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
9. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 Someone aboard the craft came out, vanished -- where?
ATKINS at last speaks up:
ATKINS
Maybe we won't search.
Maybe we wait for it to find us?
DIRECTOR
And why should it do that?
ATKINS
It knows one of us.
DIRECTOR
Who?
ATKINS
Me. I think. My family.
Years ago. Maybe they didn't know I was here. Missed me. Come looking for me now. I've got
to follow.
DIRECTOR.
Sorry. I've heard stuff
like that from photographers for years. You'll do anything for a story.
ATKINS
You must let me go!
He looks about,
frustrated, then moves toward the ship.
DIRECTOR
Now, hold on --
ATKINS, confronting the
ship, whispers.
DIRECTOR
--what?
ATKINS whispers again. We
cannot hear what he says. We hear only a murmur, but --
The ship hums, whines,
pulses, glows!
The officials, startled,
turn. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
10. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 As the elevators, a11 of them, hum, racing up their
separate shafts, empty!
The spacecraft pulses
louder.
And the great doors of
the Vehicle Assembly Building thunder wide.
The officials stare from
the doors, to the spacecraft, to ATKINS.
ATKINS
It wants me to go.
The DIRECTOR, stunned,
can only agree.
DIRECTOR
It most certainly does.
ATKINS hurries outside.
ATKINS
You'll hear in one hour!
The doors slam shut on
the shocked Canaveral staff.
As the doors BANG, a Jeep
drives up, ATKINS' friend and co-photographer assistant, BARNEY, at the wheel.
BARNEY
Hey, did I miss something?
ATKINS
Not much. Tell you on the
way.
(gets in
Jeep)
Barney? If you were a
visitor from a strange world --
BARNEY
I am! Los Angeles!
ATKINS
--just arrived here. What
would you do first?
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
11. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 BARNEY
(joking)
Check in the nearest hotel?
ATKINS
Barney! I love you. Of
course, the nearest! Our hotel!
The Jeep roars away.
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At the hotel, busy,
People coming, going, Christmas.
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The REGISTRAR,
REGISTRAR
Yes, Mr. Atkins?
ATKINS
You know me, I'm here
four times a year from Washington. Could I see your registrations?
A long pause. The
REGISTRAR scowls, ATKINS prompts him;
ATKINS
Official business...?
The REGISTRAR hands it
over. BARNEY arrives.
BARNEY
Hey, have the marines landed?
ATKINS
No, but...Williams,
Harkins, Field, Webster, Shane, Robinson, Weiner, Nagidson... no...wait...
BARNEY
What?
ATKINS
There. |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
12. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 BARNEY leans over ATKINS' shoulder, peering at the names.
BARNEY
How do you pronounce that?
ATKINS
(softly)
Klaatu barada nikto.
BARNEY can only blink at
him, waiting.
ATKINS
(almost to himself,
murmuring)
Oh, my God....yes...a
long time ago.
BARNEY
Man? Woman?
ATKINS
I don't know.
BARNEY
(snorts)
Don't know!?
ATKINS
Barada nikto!
(slams registration shut)
0 Lord! Room 212!
Upstairs, he taps at 212.
No answer. Under the door he sees a strange light, hears stranger electronic sounds. He
goes back to BARNEY, who has gathered their equipment for the return to the Cape.
A party is in full flood,
trimming a Christmas tree to one side of the lobby.
Friends call to ATKINS as
he scans all the faces coming and going, looking for the Stranger from another world; man,
woman, what? |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
13. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 A FRIEND
Hey, Atkins, old bean. Join!
ANOTHER
Have a drink!
ANOTHER
Have a bauble.
ATKINS takes the
champagne, the bauble. C1imbs one step up a small step-ladder, hangs it.
BARNEY
Here's another, chum!
ATKINS
No, thanks --
ATKINS turns, ready to
leave, when he looks down at:
The most incredibly
beautiful crystal Christmas bauble ever seen. It glows and shines with an inner light, an
inner sound, an inner music.
The light shines over his
eyes, his cheeks, his face, warning and enchanting him to wonder. He looks from it:
To the delicate hand
holding it, and the CAMERA moves down the long delicate arm to the person, the woman, who
has handed him this incredible gift.
Faint music breathes from
the crystal orb he holds in his hand.
stares up at him across
light years of time.
VOICES
(in b.g.)
Boy! That has to
be the Star of Bethlehem! On top! Put it on top!
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
14. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS, transfixed by the beauty of the woman, cannot
move.
At last he does, turns, reaches up,
Places the star, the crystal, the light, the music, high.
Turns, looks down, The crowd had closed around her like a tide.
She is gone!
Riven, he leaps down,
ATKINS
Barney, did you see?!
BARNEY points to the
lobby door, Which has just swung shut!
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Their car on the road,
pulling into the Cape, In the car, BARNEY protests,
BARNEY
How you know she's coming
back here?
ATKINS
We're in touch now. It has
to be near the ship!
Outside the Vehicle
Assembly Building, the first reporters have arrived. Word has leaked out. The newsmen are
incensed at not being filled in; for that matter, being locked out. ATKINS is permitted
in, but BARNEY is kept out with the other reporters.
Inside, ATKINS stares at
the enigmatic ship. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
15. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
(to himself)
I wonder, is she there?
AN OFFICER
What?
ATKINS
(corrects himself)
Has--anyone tried to open -- that?
ANOTHER
You're kidding. There's no
way in!
ATKINS
Let me try.
FIRST
OFFICER
See here --
SECOND
OFFICER
Let him.
ATKINS moves up to 'the
ship, watches it carefully, and then says the words, quietly:
ATKINS
Klaatu
barada
nikto.
Nothing happens.
The men behind snort and
shake their heads.
VOICES
All right, Atkins... you...
Impulsively, he repeats
the words.
ATKINS
Klaatu... barada...nikto!
The ship hums, vibrates.
A seam appears where the door might manifest itself in the skin of the ship.
The men gasp. ATKINS
waits.
But there is no further
manifestation. The ship will not breech itself just yet. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
16. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS' face lights with a thought which has just struck
him.
ATKINS
Of course. Fool. It's not
Christmas Morning!
AN
OFFICIAL
What?
ATKINS nods at the ship.
ATKINS
We open our Gift, then.
He turns to exit.
ATKINS
I'll check it out now.
Let you know.
He exits. The night is
blowing with a wind that dies as he moves across from the VAB toward the dunes, where he
thinks he has seen something.
Out on the dunes, waiting
for him, looking at the gantries, and the huge building where her spacecraft lies quietly
waiting, is the YOUNG WOMAN from the hotel, the YOUNG WOMAN who handed him the incredibly
bright crystal that he placed upon the tree.
He stands looking at her
in profile. She is dressed in slacks and a trim jacket with a scarf. Her hair blows
in the wind. It is a good
clean profile that he sees, with a touch of luminous inner knowledge in the cheeks, in the
brow, in the eyes. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
17. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She is not startled when he arrives, nor, for a long
while does she look at him. Then, very quietly, listening to far radio voices and musics
that drift by in the night, Christmas carols coming and going, she says:
YOUNG
WOMAN
In a few minutes, it's
your Christmas.
He catches the way she
has phrased it. And instead of saying hello, introducing himself, he continues as if they
were picking up a conversation dropped only a moment ago:
ATKINS
Not yours?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks
around at the sea and the land.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Not mine.
This quickens him. She is
admitting throngs, half sensed, She is looking around at the dunes now, and the ruins of
the old space pads.
ATKINS
Do you like our world?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks,
thinks, responds.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Some of it.
Her eyes are fixed to the
rusting machines now. He looks with her.
ATKINS
All of this was -- great -- once. |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
18. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She nods and muses on this truth.
YOUNG
WOMAN
I know. What a shame.
What a waste.
ATKINS defends the land,
the ruins.
ATKINS
It'll be great again some
day. We'll rebuild.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Will you...?
She looks at him for the
first time. It is an incredible face. The eyes take him down to the bone.
He almost backs off, she
is examining him so clearly, so easily, so completely.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Will I even be
here? For that matter -- will you?
Again the clear gaze.
Again, he almost pulls
back. There is no threat in her voice, but he is vaguely uneasy.
ATKINS
Unless something happens.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Ah! Things do happen,
don't they?
ATKINS
I'm not leaving, till I
change all this.
They look at Canaveral,
the night, the sea.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Then, you're in charge here? |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
19. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He gazes into her face.
ATKINS
You know I'm not.
YOUNG
WOMAN
(after a beat)
That could change.
He senses that she might
very well be the one to change it.
ATKINS
I lie in bed nights,
wishing I ran the world!
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you do if
someone gave it to you?
ATKINS
I'd clean it all up!
YOUNG
WOMAN
Or destroy it...
ATKINS
Yes. If I wasn't careful.
Far away there are sounds
of celebration. A clock strikes midnight.
She turns to look and
listen.
The wind blows over the
dunes.
YOUNG
WOMAN
There. It's midnight.
ATKINS
Time for a Second Annunciation?
She knows what he is
speaking about. The knowledge of the Biblical Annunciation is in her glowing face as she
turns back to him.
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you like to
have announced?
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
20. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS looks from her to the world far across the land,
past the silent gantries.
ATKINS
That this Christmas morn,
we get the grandest gift that man ever got. That something incredible and wonderful is
about to happen, that will change us forever and be only for the good!
She is taken and pleased
with her possible friend and pupil.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Miracles do happen, you
know.
Repentance is possible.
The response can be mercy.
The result can be salvation.
ATKINS
For me? For all of us?
YOUNG
WOMAN
You first. You wi11 be
visited by three Ghosts.
ATKINS
My God. You know Dickens!
"The Christmas Carol."
She nods.
ATKINS
Am I Scrooge, then?
YOUNG
WOMAN
No, but perhaps there are
millions like him, nearby.
ATKINS
(looks around)
When do I meet the First Ghost?
She looks off at the VAB,
and the ship hidden within, as if asking it the answer. |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
21. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 YOUNG WOMAN
(a beat, then)
I will tell you, during
the
night.
The wind rises, bringing
with it far voices, bells, exclamations, laughter, the tolling of clocks,
Both turn to look around
at the Cape, the sky, the far town, the Christmas lights,
ATKINS
It's --
YOUNG
WOMAN
Yes. It's midnight. Time for --
She touches her wrist
which is encircled with a silver band with miniaturized computer tabs engraved on it, And
the lights on the far gantries spring on. They are like immense Christmas trees in the
night.
ATKINS stares, stunned
and incredulous.
The gantries blaze. The
music of the world rises fitfully on the wind.
She steps and takes his
face in her hands and kisses him very quietly on the brow. He is immensely moved by all of
this.
ATKINS
Merry Christmas...
YOUNG
WOMAN
(nods)
I wish you well.
She touches his eyelids
with two fingers.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Stay there. |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
22. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 His eyes are shut. He cannot open them. He hears her
moving away.
ATKINS
Wait!
From the darkness we see
her shape pause, we hear her voice.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Yes?
ATKINS
Your name!?
She responds, further
off, turning to send her voice back in the night wind.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata.
He quickens, startled,
feverish, eyes shut.
ATKINS
Klaatu!?
YOUNG
WOMAN'S VOICE
No!
We see her silhouette,
further off.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata. Klaatu's daughter.
She is gone. The dunes
are empty. He opens his eyes.
ATKINS
(whispers)
Klaata --- |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
23. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks down at:
Her footprints in the
sand, which, in a sudden gust of wind, blow away, are erased, gone!
The Christmas-lit
gantries, all along the Cape, go out, one by one!
He stands in the
darkness, riven, as we
FADE TO
BLACK.
Inside the VAB, the
officials are sitting or standing in a half circle around the spacecraft.
ATKINS looms up behind
them suddenly, stares at the ship for a long moment, then says, quietly:
ATKINS
Get some sleep. Christmas
morning - I go in the ship.
He turns and moves off
into the shadows. A door shuts.
At the hotel, there is
quietness, shadows.
On the top of the tree
which is still lit, is the incredible crystal bauble placed there hours before by ATKINS.
An ATTENDANT is shutting
the tree lights off as ATKINS arrives.
The lights blink into
darkness.
The ATTENDANT and ATKINS
stand looking up at:
That amazing crystalline
illumination brought as beauty from a far place.
ATTENDANT
Hey... what's that connected to? |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
24. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS softly responds.
ATKINS
You may well ask,
son... you may well ask.
He reaches up, removes
the bauble, to which the ATTENDANT objects.
ATKINS
It goes back on the
tree...
at dawn.
ATKINS goes up to bed.
In the middle of the
night, the bauble, which he has placed on the second pillow on the empty side of the bed,
pulses with dim light, half-musical sounds.
ATKINS opens his eyes,
and looks at:
The crystal, which burns
and lowers its serene light.
ATKINS speaks to the
light.
ATKINS
Are you here?
KLAATA's voice whispers
back:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
...yes....
ATKINS reponds.
ATKINS
And somewhere else, at
the same time.
KLAATAS
VOICE
(softly)
Near, yes. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
25. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS watches the growing, fading light,
ATKINS
When do I see you again?
The crystal responds,
KLAATA'S
VOICE
...after you have seen
the
First Ghost.
ATKINS remembers the old
Dickens tale.
ATKINS
Christmas Past?
The crystal murmurs and
illuminates itself with response:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
When the sun rises.
He nods, knowing what to
do.
ATKINS
Are...are you the Ghost
of
Christmas Present?
And the crystal replies,
quietly:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Perhaps. If you deserve me,
ATKINS
And the Ghost of Christmas Future?
The crystal almost
darkens, then burns with a firefly light,
KLAATA'S
VOICE
(far away)
Perhaps there will be
none.
Maybe... there is no future.
ATKINS
(quietly, impulsively)
Klaata!
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Sleep! |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
26. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
I --
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Sleep...!
His eyes stare and close.
Her voice fades as he goes into slumber.
KLAATA'S
VOICE
.....sss.....ssleeeep.......
The light dulls and he is
asleep and we
FADE OUT
TO:
Morning. Just before
sunrise. The Cape. The Vehicle Assembly Building washed with the first cold colors of
approaching dawn.
ATKINS is out on the
dunes, his camera busy.
He finds something, looks
down.
At the remnants of
KLAATA's footprints, going off on their own path in the sand, from the last night.
He takes a picture of
them, then turns to scan:
The empty gantries.
As the sun rises.
He turns to walk toward
the VAB.
Inside, all is silence.
The people have taken ATKINS at his word. Several guards lie asleep on their strewn mats,
around the ship. The NASA OFFICIAL drowses, half-asleep, over a game of solitaire laid out
on a cardtable nearby. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
27. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS stands by the ship. His lips move. We cannot hear
what he says. But we know the words from the way his mouth forms them, in pantomime.
The seam of the ship's
portal splits, opens, with a soft humming and a grand illumination.
The NASA OFFICIAL opens
his eyes, quickly, blinks, starts.
ATKINS
Shh!
His finger to his lips,
warning silence, ATKINS walks up, into the ship, which seals itself shut!
Circling in through the
geometrically illuminated corridors, ATKINS arrives at the heart of the ship, where:
A crystalline oblong
shape, a seven foot long object, glows in the center of a room. Inside the receptacle, or
bright 'coffin' if you wish to use the word, suspended in light and shadow, lies a body on
display.
At ATKINS' approach, the
long oblong crystal pulses with somewhat brighter color.
ATKINS, above it, looks
down, and is incredulous.
ATKINS
My God...! You are the
Ghost of Christmas Past!
A voice from within the
oblong responds, quietly.
THE VOICE
...yes... a summer,
anyway....
long gone...
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28. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS whispers.
ATKINS
I know you.
THE VOICE
..yes
..
ATKINS
We met when I was a boy!
THE VOICE
We did.....
ATKINS speaks the name at
last.
ATKINS
Klaatu!
Now, close up, we see the
serene and sleeping face of the man within the crystal.
THE VOICE
The same....
ATKINS cannot resist
questioning.
ATKINS
Are you.....?
KLAATU anticipates the
full question and replies, quietly, from his half-sleep.
KLAATUS
VOICE
Alive and
dead?
A bit of both..
ATKINS is bewildered. The
light and shadows motion over his face.
KLAATUS
VOICE
When I left your somewhat
damaged world, 30 years ago, I was somewhat damaged, myself.
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
29. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
They didn't---
KLAATU'S
VOICE
--understand? Yes. So
now, by this means, I am sustained, I do return. How much longer will I live? Now knowing,
let us speak quickly. What have you all been up to, the past 30 years?
ATKINS
The usual --
The light flickers. We
watch the serene face under the crystal barrier.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Ah, that's bad.
ATKINS
Some of it's good.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
I know. Yes. But I want a
complete recitation. The Universe is the Great School. You are the new students.
ATKINS
Will you grade us?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
We are teachers, yes,
but only to a point. After that--
ATKINS remembers
something from the Past.
ATKINS
Our executioners...?
The light plays over
KLAATU's face. We move in close on his silent mouth. His voice speaks from within his
mind.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
...we promised
destruction, yes. But--
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
30. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
Now you've changed your mind?
KLAATUS
VOICE
Perhaps we come only to
punish. And leave you to lick your wounds. We have watched you, and wondered at you. So
much that is good. So much that is right. Yet, so much that falters and fails.
ATKINS
You've come to test us, then?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
The Great Graduation Examination, yes!
ATKINS
And if we succeed?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
You move up in the Universe.
ATKINS
And...failing...
KLAATU'S
VOICE
...stay where you are, or
move down to darkness. But, all your own doing. You have already lit your fuse. No
need for us to light it. We can put it out, of course, and take some of your Toys away.
The ones that threaten us and the Universe. After all, a Nursery is no place for such
things.
ATKINS
Are we that young, then?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Just out of the cave, the
crib, just fallen from the Tree, and forgiveable, but dangerous. Enough. Gather the people
for the Great Exam, or the Great Trial, the Test, mean? Gather all your optimists, bring
all your cynics. We must hear the pros and cons, The Human Race For and Against the Human
Race.
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
31. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
They won't come!
KLAATU'S
VOICE
They will. When we have
frightened them somewhat.
ATKINS
Nothing can frighten them!
KLAATU'S
VOICE
You think not?
The crystal oblong glows.
KLAATU's face, asleep,
almost seems to smile. He murmurs.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
We have ways....
A soft chime rings. The
humming stops. The crystal oblong swarms with shadows and goes dark.
As does the face of
KLAATU.
ATKINS would say more,
but, seeing this, stops, turns, pulls back, goes...
Out through the circling
light and shadow of the corridors.
Outside the OFFICIAL is
waiting. ATKINS says:
ATKINS
Call a press conference
for five this afternoon.
OFFICIAL
We dont want any press!
ATKINS
(looks at the ship)
They do.
OFFICIAL
It's Christmas Day! |
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EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
32. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
Can't think of a better day for it.
OFFICIAL
We
ATKINS
That ship can
destroy this building, any time it wants.
OFFICIAL
My God! The building
cost 200 million do11ars!
ATKINS
That ship is worth...
(makes up a number)
seventeen billion dollars.
That goes it. The
OFFICIAL is overwhelmed with such facts.
OFFICIAL
Five? Hard to organize it by --
He stops, because:
The spacecraft has
groaned like Marley's ghost, trembling with power!
OFFICIAL
(swallows)
Five.
He grabs a phone.
CUT TO:
Outside, the
wilderness around the gantries. ATKINS looks up.
At the far top of one
of the Apollo structures, he sees a small figure. It must be the one oerson he wants to
see now.
He climbs up
toward....KLAATA....who is waiting for him. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
33. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 On top of the gantry, KLAATA does indeed wait for him.
They stand looking at the
spread of the world, and beyond to the Vehicle Assemb1y Building where, on one vast
300-foot side, the NASA officials have caused to be strung, in outline, a Christmas tree
made entirely of wire and lit bulbs; a tree same 200 feet high, softly glowing in the
overcast day.
ATKINS
Will they come, do you think?
KLAATA
(lightly)
The reporters? To the
news conference? They had better.
ATKINS
Or you'll teach them
reverse sums in 'take-away'?
She nods, the wind
blowing her hair.
ATKINS
What will you take away, first?
KLAATA
(thinking)
Everyone must be surprised.
He stares at her as any
man would stare at any woman who is a special windvane to a special weather that blows
across the Cape this Christmas Day.
ATKINS
My good sense is gone already.
She gazes at him quietly,
reading his temperature.
KLAATA
For awhile, I'll hold onto mine.
(she gestures to the
spread of Canaveral)
We're out to save the World, aren't we? |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
34. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks at the World, at her, and back to the Wor1d,
laughing quietly at some small thought.
ATKINS
On your world, do women
have headaches?
KLAATA
(laughs)
Never!
ATKINS
(stunned)
What a world that must be.
KLAATA
And here?
ATKINS
(goes serious)
Men have headaches, all the time,
KLAATA
War does that...
She touches his elbow,
pulls gently,
KLAATA
Shall we go find a cure?
ATKINS
You're the teacher.
She turns at the top of
the stair in the blowing wind, and gazes at him, nodding quietly.
KLAATA
Yes. I am.
They go down into the
world of Christmas,
The reporters begin to
gather for the News Conference. Not many, of course. It's short notice. It's Christmas,
Reporters are coming up from Miami, of course, and a few who can fly in from some of the
Southern States in a few hours. Local TV will link into national TV, naturally. We see the
accumulation of people at the Cape. |
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| "THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
35. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 They are gathering outside the great doors of the Vehic1e
Assembly Building.
Announcements are being
made over TV, cross-country, around the world.
Coming downstairs in his
hotel, ATKINS glances over at the Christmas tree, which a moment before was filled with
ornaments.
The tree is empty of
baubles, of light.
Only the crystal fire
hangs at the top, a promising Star. ATKINS turns to a BELLHOP nearby.
ATKINS
Hey, Chuck, is Christmas
over already?
He nods to the tree. The
BELLHOP stares, is astounded.
BELLHOP
Hey, who took off a11 the
ornaments!?
ATKINS turns to find
KLAATA there. He glances back at the tree, and at her again. He suspects her of this.
ATKINS
Well?
KLAATA
What are a few baubles?
Its the spirit that counts, right?
Disquieted, ATKINS
leaves.
The Press Conference
convenes. ATKINS finds himself as interlocutor for a highly unlikely visitation, and an
amusing, to almost everyone, concept: |
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